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Circle Of Friends

 

 

 

 

Turn over a new leaf today and smile ,

live your life to the fullest and never look back.

Forget about all of your worries,

and leave all of your worries behind you.

 

Today you're going to shine like the sun,

and become the woman that you used to be.

You're going to learn to build your self-esteem,

and feel like you've just been born again.

 

The world is waiting for you my friend,

so don't let us all down because we love you.

We know that deep inside you're going to make it,

and that you're never going to cry another tear.

 

You'll always have the best of our love,

and remember that we'll be right here waiting for you.

We're right behind you wherever life takes you,

we'll always be there for you when you need us.

 

This friendship of ours will keep you strong,

and know that you will always be welcome here.

So keep in mind that we love you unconditionally,

and that we wish you the best of luck, always!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • drow
    November 17, 2008
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    i first think in my sister family friend ship love i like the way it makes me feel


  • BehindTheShadow
    October 2, 2008
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    Friendship at it's finest, you've summed it up well! Good luck.


  • Tercil gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    Compared with some I've read tonight, this has been more rewarding to the senses and the way this has been written is as if two, not three care for this individual. It isn't a one on one situation, and in my eyes, that makes that fresh reading, nicely laid out.


  • Upon Deaths Meeting
    September 28, 2008

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    This was a truly good and nice poem, Jeremy. I enjoyed this and the picture you chose--yet again--I think went well with the poem. I enjoyed the meaning, the words and just the entire thing, really. You're pretty good when it comes to spelling the words, too--unlike a lot of people on here--and that is an amazing thing.

    I'll read some more of your stuff as soon as I change the page I am on and click on your name again. Which means, in short, that I'll read more as soon as I can--which should be right away.

    Anyway, your writing seems very much developed so far and it seems like you have just a natural ability for poetry... and not just one genre of the style of writing.


  • trekkergirl
    September 28, 2008
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    nice picture. Nicely written poem about friendship. Good job

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