Darling she sits kissed by him
bubbly splashs in hearts flutter,
they danced the notes of their song
over cascade petals in love.
She waits dinner on lace table cloth
homey in every sense, with apple pie.
they never sink badged egos
to one another, no wounds indeed.
She counts the daisy's of I love you's
into first born birth in their dream,
the dream becoming a joyous family
a life ridged from lies, deciet and pain
She and him both know, hurt brakes us
into moldy torn pies on the dinner table,
they give their utmost safety net
on total structure, inside matters of love.
A contest entry
- Heart and Soul by Tercil.
800 points, ended October 5, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice write!
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Somehow, this sounds remotely like an outside picnic, why, I do not know, but, there is certainly some outside influence going on here. Maybe it has to do with the cascading petals. "their utmost safety net
on total structure, inside matters of love." tells me that outside, you have to have the foundations of love holding well. Nice read.
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