youve got the podium now
speak to us
young sunday knight
our heads mustve known the shroud
so ignorantly blinded
our thanks for riding high
on a steed comprised of faith
and pride
to wave away the milky fog
then promptly wave goodbye
godspeed, golden soldier
theres many more holy battles
in desperate need of timely instigation
did you gaze upon the grateful masses?
they cheered your name
as you displayed your prized corpses.
the pathless heathens
you so compassionately removed
from missery
you left one glorious trail
the audience is yours
we know its hard to discern us
from mice
from such a lofty shining pedistal
but grace us with response,
mighty sunday knight
did you bring us anything
but monday mourning?
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i loved it . political in a sense . private and emotional . double meanings . and the worded grace you gave .
exceptional .
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ooooh
very descriptive, and a nice double with the knight/nite. I like it a lot, and I love how rich and descriptive your work is!! -
Very good!
Liked the ending on this. This could be followed by Tuesday mourning and Wednesday mourning...but oh well. THANKS for a good write like this!!
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