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The Highway

Cars drive upon it
the lonely,
and homeless
walk it

I live it
the sudden cars
pass me in the rain
lights flash
as i turn to look

I watch
as others like me
walk it, I pray
for their safety

For the highway
is life, and life
is dangerous

Because in the end,
nobody gets out alive

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  • Stride
    September 28, 2008

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    Only the good die young. I would ask your inspiration for this, but I have a feeling I don't need to. Very well used metaphor, though.