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Holding Hands

Almost here.
a few more days
nervous and excitement fill me
time is about to stop for a few days
heaven only knows what will happen
I can almost feel you hugging me
I can almost see your eyes in my head.
an image i certianly never want to get rid of.
Just to hug you for the first time,
Just to feel the passion around us
Just to wake up that morning and say,
"Hello new world, I am finally meeting,
Mr.Perfect!"
My world will never be the same,
I will look at all the obstacles and pass right through them without a problem
I wont have a problem because I will be holding his hand through it all.
I will know as soon as his hand and mine fit perfectly that I wont need anyone or anything else,
Together we can make it through anything and thats why I love my Mr.Perfect
Just to be with that brightest star in the sky, makes me feel happy and content and everything will be alright

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  • xSarahx
    September 30, 2008

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    This is really cute. I remember being excited and nervous, and bubbly whenever I knew I'd be seeing my boyfriend. It's a nice feeling eh?

    I like this piece, just watch your contractions with "wont" and "thats". Overall good job, good luck!


    • PunkRock Misfit
      September 30, 2008
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      Aww thank you
      yes very nice

      and awesome! Thank you and yeah I knew something wasn't right lol.. I always mess up on those lol