So this is goodbye
you walked that difficult path
where one path leads you astray
the other path
takes you somewhere else.
Its amazing how many friends you end up making
in the course of life through out his site,
but in the end it is always some personal
issue(s) that drives ya insanely mad
to the point that you believe nobody
is willing to help you out.
Well I walk this lonely path
and I shed some crimson blood stained tears
as I watch you take off and
return when its convenient for you.
I find myself asking you this:
does your personal life mean
so much to you that you must leave
or
is your personal life so chaotic
that you must depart and ask us for some words
because well you feel that its for the best?
Its sad to see you go
but in the end if it was meant to be
then you will return to thee.
I wish you nothing but the best in life.
Author notes
kinda hard to write something when you suddenly get hit with this and its about someone you trulyc are about but feel so helpless.
Hopefully life gets better for you.
A contest entry
- Goodbye AP, for now. by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended October 12, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
no critical comments please because its not really a poem but more like a little ramblings from the heart of someone who cares about this particular poet/contest holder!
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awww this is great!
i love the emotion in it.
thanks so much for your comment.
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i lavvv uuu
=]
i hope you dont mean that i mean really do you really base your happiness on what people think of you: your only asking for sadness, people will always only want what is in their own best interest. everyone is like that, though for some people its buried very deep beneath their behaviors.
its interesting what very spiritual thinkers have to say about this, i suggest you look into the teachings of Eckhart Tolle.. hes supported by oprah.. lol xD but he kicks a** seriously. i really think you would appreciate what he has to say, look into buying a copy of one of his books. seriously
i freaking love you bro,
oldschoolhero
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Ah, 'tis a fine write, indeed. As usual you express yourself quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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It does hurt, where once there was love, now nothing. Empty feeling that can be replaced by another love, perhaps sweeter than the one you lost. Many are fickle today, not know what they want or love they need. Like a dog looking into the waters with bone in its mouth, lets it go to grab the other one, losing his, now with nothing. All the best my friend. nwever give up on love.
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This is a powerful write...But, personally, I refuse to say goodbye until I see that person being interred or cremated, I always say 'Later'....
Friends come and go, like seasons in a lifetime...but only a few really touch us in our herats..those are the ones we cling to.
Woderfully written bro.
Bravo
'D'
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I'm sorry paul, I will return someday. I know it. plus we can talk elsewhere
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Saying goodbye is one of the most difficult things to say. Good luck in this contest
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