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I Will Love You Forever

I will love you forever,
till death do us part.
Loved you from the begining,
right from the start.

I will love you forever,
even if I move away.
I will think about you,
every day.

I will love you forever,
and I'll always care.
I'll be that young girl
that always stares.

I will love you forever,
I hope you can see.
You my dear,
are all I dream.

I will love you forever,
until the end.
You are the one,
my heart I will lend.

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  • fake-or-real-smile
    September 28, 2008

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    ooo i love this

    It kinda made me smile but feel sad at the same time

    Great work!

    x,x


  • Shannon62875
    September 27, 2008

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    WOW!

    I Love This WRite!!!!! It is really good! And like i mentioned i usually like sad poems more.. but damn, this was GREAT!!! You did an awesome job!!! I bet you had some influence to write this one... Im glad you found that one and only... You did a great job expressing how you feel!!! Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!!

    Shannon*Leah