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My Heart, Your Eyes

You should know this by now,
That I love you.
I just can't stop it
Because you stuck with me.

You looked in my eyes,
And stole my soul.
Or rather,
I gave it to you to keep.

Along with that,
I gave you my heart.
It has always belonged to you
So don't give it back.

When you first caught my eye,
I only liked you a bit.
Then that liking grew.
Finally, it blossomed into love.

The same day that I knew I loved you,
You told me the same.
I could hardly believe
What was happening to me.

I didn't think I could love anyone,
Not this soon in my life.
But the lock and key of my heart...
They are yours, forever and for always.

I don't want anything back.
I've given you everything
That I want you to have
So keep it close to your own heart.

Don't hurt me any more
Than you already have,
And remember:
I love you.

You know how you won my heart?
Of course, your happiness and personality.
But it was your eyes.
My heart, your eyes.

Author notes

KokoluvsDaniel: Just look at my name! lol yeah, I love him so much. He definately won my heart because of his eyes. They always take my breath away, and he never fails to leave my knees shaking. Whether he looks at me or not. I hope this is what you were looking for... Thanks so much!

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  • BarbedWireButterfly
    October 4, 2008

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    Quiet nice. I tiny bit cliche if I may say so. The message is sweet though and I'm sure he appreciates it, which really is all that matters in the end. Anyway, thank you for entering and good luck


  • kel dog
    October 3, 2008
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    so sweet. i love it.


  • HereComesTheSun
    September 29, 2008
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    so far so great
    love you dear