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Mirror

You stare at the mirror,
Many thoughts on your mind.
Your eyesights good,
Yet your so blind.
You see your hair, all shiny and cool.
But how can you be such a fool?
What 's behind the mirror?
Front and back.
Your messing with it,
and suddenly comes a crack.
Shock turns to annoyance,
as you thought of your money.
Later on you'll have a laugh,
Though it's not all that funny.
In the corner lies the mirror,
All broken and cracked.
Too late, it's gone,
It won't come back.

Author notes

I had this idea about a person that was like a mirror, with everyone worrying about their looks and stuff, and the mirror person was only used as, well, a mirror. It gets kind of sad because the "mirror reflector" was messing with the mirror person and the mirror person got "cracked". It was a really weird concept and I don't think it's all that good, but i would appreciate suggestions.

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