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A Simple Tear!



Quickly it grows,
That simple tear
Killing my soul
Soon I'll disappear.

Always it falls
That wicked tear
The moment I crawl,
Down on my knees.

Heavily it seeps
Down to my soul,
when the sounds of fear
knock on my door.

More tears come along
When nobody's near,
To pull me up
Right on my feet.

More reasons to weep
Keep flying around,
When my bones are crushed,
No one frowns.

Slowly tears fill my eyes,
When I'm left to bleed,
When buried alive.

When you see me alone
Frightened to die,
You walk right on
Adding tears to dry.

When you hear my voice
Calling for help
You turn your face,
As if nothing was felt.

When you hear my lungs
Asking for air
You pay no attention,
You do not care.


A final  tear makes my day,
Spoken by a loved one
Words of curse and blame.


Born to be that tear
Marked on my face
Perfectly put

By you, right into place.

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  • mcrfan322
    September 28, 2008
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    verry well done.... i really liked this poem.... u did a great job...this poem is really sad... but its so true....... the writing is great.... the words and the phraysing is great... keep up the great work... i cant wait to read more.... good luck in the contest

  • Page Deleted.
    September 28, 2008

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    This is really sad, but well penned.

    I loved the lines:
    "When you hear my lungs
    Asking for air
    You pay no attention,
    You do not care."

    Thankyou for entering and best of luck.

    Forever--x


  • trekkergirl
    September 28, 2008

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    very nicely written. Good flow to it and I feel lots of emotions when Iread it. thanks for sharing


  • perfectdarkangel
    September 27, 2008

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    this poem has a very nice flow to its. its very emotional and sad keep up the great work. and best of luck to you in the contest


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    September 27, 2008
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    Such an emotional write
    Very well penned
    Raw and honest

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