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perfection is overrated

 

If you are seeking out
someone who will sweep you
off your feet and make you breakfast
when you are sick

[than darling, that is me]

Though, if you need a man
who always does right,
has a six-figure income
and has a Hollywood life

[than, darling, that's not me]

I can only be me,
but you won't regret it.
You will be my angel,
and I'll make heaven jealous.

Perfection is overrated
when you have me right here

....waiting.

 

 

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About Me:

 

- Lowercase Prelude (or you can call me Chris)

- 20 years old

- from Texas

- been on AP since March

- been writing seriously since Jr. High in High School

- Don't have a defined writing style or certain subject matter I stick to, I just write

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Comments


  • movedon
    October 2, 2008
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    wowi really needed to read this. thank you for sharing this write.

    love
    mylee


  • just weak hands
    October 2, 2008
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    Loved It :]

    aw i love this :] it's very true- perfection is overrated ! best of luck in the contest !


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    WOW Chris this is fantastic. I love this a lot. the last 7 lines are the best.. YEAH!!!

    good luck

    kat


  • x-dont -ask-me-x
    September 27, 2008
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    I love it its real true and to the point lol.