Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

use me, abuse me

seize me and squeeze me

rip my soul apart


caress me, possess me

take away my pride


use me, abuse me

to satisfy your wicked needs


deceive me, then leave me

when you have used me up

Author notes

i gave it a try. i haven't written anything for like six weeks...

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 9 of 9

  • live-laugh-love
    September 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    wow
    srry this is't wat i'm looking for...
    but i do like...
    well writen and demonic....
    i like... but this does not work 4 my contest


    • LittleAnn
      September 28, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      there's also a "sorry" coming from my side as I didn't read your contest description carefully enough so I didn't notice you wanted poems about verbal abuse...
      anyway, thanks for commenting and good luck with your contest!
      annie


  • Aureola
    September 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Too lazy to comment properly today, but I really liked this.


  • Melodies
    September 28, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    YES, it is a product of some kind speaking. lol Forgive me for my humor.

  • Melodies
    September 28, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I shall try to imagine that this poem is being written to a facial tissue. AND it might make me cry, so that's why. lol Coolness, Annie!

    • LittleAnn
      September 28, 2008

      Edit | Reply
      I have no idea where this one came from. It was just there and I had to write it down...
      Gosh, why do my poems do that to everyone? This Friday, I made one of my teachers cry when I gave her "unworthy of living" to read (maybe you remember that one...)
      Joey once wrote one that sounded all like being about religious, racial or whatever kind of persecution... and it turned out to be about a cat chasing a mouse...
      I'm gonna ask her to post it on AP for you to read...

      • Melodies
        September 28, 2008

        Edit | Reply
        YES! Please do. I would be glad to read Joey's poem. OK... I finally thought of a one-line joke: If vegetable oil is made from vegetables, what is hair oil made from? lol


        • LittleAnn
          September 28, 2008
          Edit | Reply
          Thank you for spreading some fun on this dark page!

1 - 9 of 9