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fingertips

your fingertips across my skin
(oh) were do i begin
the senseless feeling hidden inside
only to awaken at the touch of your eyes

you hypnotize me with your words
you control my every move

now i'm falling down for
(oh) watch me if you will

tides my turn and winds will blow
but i'll always be there for you

the song birds sing the melody
the sweet sound of you and me

we wrote your names across each other hearths
meaning forever we do not part

now hold me in you loving arms
until night breaks into dawn

give me your heart
and i'll keep it safe

give me your word
and i'll promise to stay

it's hard to say yes
and easy to say no
i'll make it one step simpler
please don't go
























tune to fingertips: Almost lovers by Fine frenzy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HCeS-yorGtc

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Comments


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 10
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    Just that magic touch from someone special, is all that we need to keep us going. So very true!!!


  • paperbackwriter
    January 30
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  • Painted Nails
    November 9, 2008

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    What a sweet write! I don't know if you were going for this, but I saw it as a song. Well, even if you didn't mean this to be a song, its a great piece!
    Sydney


  • fangs to blame
    October 13, 2008
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    Sweet and lovly well done as always.