Blades of grass whispered the song
Dancing in the milky moonlit gleam
Upon the water, the thorned roses lay
Plucked by the deadliest of hands
The ruby glow of dangerous eyes
Smirking visible on his gorgeous face
My knees began to buckle under me
My mind screaming for his attention
Our delicate hands intertwined
Gliding along the waterside
Intricate creatures around us screamed
For he was the one forbidden
A persuasive voice ringing in my ear
Breath sending chills down my spine
A low, soft chuckle was heard behind
Temptation was becoming a priority
Pulsing loudly, my veins invited him
Protruding knifes piercing my flesh
The ground began to melt beneath me
The emptying feeling followed
Colors of the night were disarray
Everything became a crimson fade
Forest creatures scattered in horror
Watching this unknown thing feasting
In lean, strong arms, my limp body lay
Finding my voice, it screamed in agony
Blood stained lips met mine passionately
Quickly I was changed, no longer a mortal
Forever, he said, we could now be as one
Both immortal and unbreakable creatures
Roaming the night breathlessly
Never having to leave each other's side
Toying with a rose from the water
He handed the frozen bloom to me
The petals were astonishingly solid
Alike our bodies and love in time
Author notes
"Vampire", "Moon", "Moonlight", "Scare", "Blood"
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Thank you for your entry
Nicely written. Good flow and structure.
Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest and thank you for following the rules.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment
Happy Halloween and God Bless
Tammy
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Very solid write! Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Confused about the "..." lol...
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Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's all I can say nee-chan. This is amazing!!! LOVE IT!!!
You rock!
Love ya!
~Me~
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