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Take my hand awhile

Take my hand awhile and hold it tightly now,
before you walk away just one more time.
Feel the love within my palm flow through your body,
remembering darling that you once were mine.

Look to my eyes reflection and see only you,
for you are all I am and shall ever be.
Take with you my love for no-one else can hold,
the memory of the nights you spent with me.

Yet times and people change not ever knowing why,
what once was so becomes an also ran.
Loves fleeting moments grasped will live eternally,
In the archives of another lovers hand.

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fool no1...Heartbroken headcase.

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  • Jaffa-
    October 28, 2008

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    I liked this poem a lot. You can feel the emotion. I partiularly liked 'for you are all I am and shall ever be.' I very nearly cried. I also liked the background i feel it goes well.

  • glowtime
    October 1, 2008

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    Parting,

    is such sweet sorrow. I am lucky not to have gone through this but I'm sure there's not much sweet about it and I bet it's sheer agony.
    A sad poem but wonderfully done GTx


    • Sunshine Always
      October 3, 2008
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      Hi GT, Oh boy are you lucky....Fools rush in where angels fear to tred...Lol..Hugs mal


  • Pearl-1
    September 29, 2008
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    AWWW lovely poem Mal
    xxx

  • Thomas beechey
    September 28, 2008

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    That's pretty much what I was trying to say in my last poem --- you've expressed this very well and I can identify with what you write

    Tom


  • humblpye gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    Sigh...

    yes indeed, loves sweet memories, it's a road we all must take sooner or later, in the end, someone is always left with the memories...nicely penned my friend

    John

    • Sunshine Always
      September 28, 2008
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      Hi John , glad you enjoyed this one.Amazing what creeps into the mind before dawn...Nice to see you again...mal


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    September 28, 2008
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    sounds as though you had a great time,,always remember that x


  • Lovely 2
    September 27, 2008
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    So sweet and sad! Love the descriptions.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!

    I really love this fresh perspective your poem lends to the tenderness of true love, as well as the bittersweet feelings of pain through the inevitable changes we all face in those life-altering mysterious ways of the universe... Thank you for sharing your lovely, heart-and-soul-felt poem with us!!! Peace, Cyn

    • Sunshine Always
      September 27, 2008
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      Hi Cyn, and many thanks to you for dropping by at my place to read and leave such a lovely comment. Pleased you enjoyed it...Peace to you also ...mal

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