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Heretic Baptism

Drawn by desire,
Flow of blood,
Quicken with anticipation,
React to the pleasure.

Lost in the moment,
Rapture, you're captured,
Unquenchable madness
As crimson trickles,
Playful lust runs,
Stand to ceremony
And flee...

All too late.

A baptism, irrevocable,
Blood thicker than water,
It binds...
Traitor, fallen,
Hunted for all time.

Live or die?

Choice whispers across lips
Rose-red from thirst sated,
Move towards salvation
Of a heretic kind
Fear-driven...

Spilt blood fills bodies,
Mixing life-liquids,
Closer
You writhe,
And ecstasy comes.

A beast of sex and blood.

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  • Rinoasis
    September 27, 2008

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    Whoah..! That was sexy, lol! Kinda made me feel all sensual and steamy, hehe. The ending was brilliant although I didn't quite catch the point behind the first stanzas but then in the end I got it all with a surprise line "a beast of sex and blood", haha. Well done!

    Thanks for entering my contest!
    Blessings,
    ~M