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why should i?

how can one prepare to say goodby

when the time has not come

so why should i?

you asked me to never give up on you
so i will not even when others do

i will stand by your side
i will pray for life and healing
i will not prepare for what has not come

i will keep on beleiving

miracles are what i am praying for
even if they say death could be at your door

i will not give up on you
this i can promise
because i love you

we have the choice and this is mine
i will not let you down
not at this time

you have a chance to turn it around
mind over matter

is what we have always been about
so this is my path this is no doubt

i beleive in you
even though it feels like it might be
the end

look at each day as new
the miracle is waiting for you

rest and know that god has his plan

know you are blessed and that you are a wonderful man

and that god is in control


of his ultimate







plan........

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  • soldiersoul gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    theres always PLAN BEE put a hive in his drive...its either HONEY or some serious swelling up that stings like a bitch...i agree with IRIDESSA....DONT GIVE UP!!!!!!!! just show him who's QUEEN BEE


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    September 27, 2008

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    So sad. Please do not give up on him. I know you are going through a really hard time right now. I am here if you ever need someone to talk to. I have read several of your poems. So I know what is going on. ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~


    • candyinchelsea
      September 28, 2008
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      thank you my dear

      you have been so kind to me,
      and i will never give up.
      i just want peace if i cant have that right now
      i will just be patient and kind.
      the family is tough as nails and i spend alot of time crying. its hard to be where you are not wanted. its as simple as that.
      i love them all but i stand by my man through it all. i will not let them drive me away.
      and i promise i will never give up
      love to you
      c


  • Pixi
    September 27, 2008

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    beautiful

    i really enjoyed reading this, it's sooo nice. you can make a song out of it. well written, and flows well.
    good job!
    i thik i'll be reading more of you soon..
    sherry


    • candyinchelsea
      September 28, 2008
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      thank you

      you are very kind,
      and i can use all the support i can get.
      my ap family has been a rock for me.
      i will take a look at your work too.
      a giant hug
      c


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    I think we've all prayed for miracles for someone we love. I know I'm praying for a couple right now. This is a beautifully written piece! Very sentimental and loving. Well done!


    • candyinchelsea
      September 28, 2008
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      i will pray with you

      thank you,
      i will pray with you. god has big ears
      and i beleive in miracles.
      oooooooooxxxxxxxxxxxx

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