Rumblings has its echo
inside conscious,
thoughts respond all time.
Anchored firm in bed,
Heart becomes heavy
Good and bad settle deep,
leave their foot prints.
Gloomy countenance bent down
Albeit lush green surroundings,
With Water in lake to brim
Wind wraps surface,
wrinkles disappear fast
as quick as they appear,
without leaving a scar.
Author notes
Credited to 'photobucket.com'
A contest entry
- By the water PIF Quickie by carole21.
1700 points, ended September 30, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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thoughtful take on the prompt . . thanks for the contest entry
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a beautiful poem dad I love your imagery and emotions you have painted beauty with your words dad good luck in the contest
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