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Never Knowing God..

Life have always been hard for me.
My world was always crashing down,
with my dreams..

I have never finished school.
The devil used me as,
a tool..

Never knowing God.
Did not care if I was right or,
ever wrong..

Electric doors concrete floors.
I was given a bible then I was saved,
by the Lord..

Never giving up I prayed then prayed.
My good deeds prayed out for the crimes,
I have portrayed..

Now I never give up on anything I do.
I ask the great Lord, God, then he,
guides me through..

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Thanks for the contests... It made a great Poem...
your friend in Poetry... JackReed3...

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  • sOuL
    November 4, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest
    this is a very good poem
    i wish you success
    take care

    oh forgot to tell you that i like this poem


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    INSPIRING! Thats all I can say. The flow was superb and the meaning awesome


  • Riamh
    September 30, 2008
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    This shows great faith and long may you have it. Best of luck in the contest,
    Slayer


  • daviscth silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    This is a wonderful and heart felt tribute to the Lord. Thanks so much for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.