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Absolute Rubbish (Alphabet Aliteration)

Always answering
But barely believing

Cannot come calling
Don't do drawling

Even ever ends
Forgetting faithful friends

Gutted, grieving
Heavy, hateful, heaving

Idle in illness
Justly joyless

Kindle Kindness
Losing, loveless

Memories make me moody
Never nothing newly

Onset of opponent
Probably punishment

Quietly question
Relevent religion

Sadly sorrowful
Troubled, tearful

Unsure, understating
Vulnerable, violating

Want woven way
xenon x-ray

Youthful yesterday, yarrow
Zealous, zenith, zero

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This is very difficult and I have probably done it wrongly. At least I have tried.

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  • Ja Vorbesc
    September 29, 2008

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    Nope. You have done it rightly! Congratulations.

    I like this. It's short and simple (read coherent). I noticed a few misspellings, or what I assumed were misspellings, in lines B, G, and R, but they don't really matter. Just thought I'd point them out. Please don't kill me.

    I wish you the best!