Thoughts racing
Too many to write
I find I'm chasing
A new ghost tonight
I wouldn't have thought
That I'd be the one
To fight through it all
And then say we're done
It wasn't your fault
And I want you to know
That I never planned
On letting you go
I'm finding it hard
So hard to concieve
That there's anything left
In this world to believe
The swords are put asside
From fighting for days
I'll miss you, though,
In so many ways
We've fought our battle
We just couldn't win
And now a new chapter
I must begin
But we gave it a shot
And I really did try
Dare they say I didn't
Know that its a lie
I just need to move on
From the land of the dead
The sorrow and pain
Were messing with my head
Our time is over
Though not how we planned
This wasn't your fault
Remember that if you can
I wanted too much
And wanted it now
Regardless of cost
Regardless of how
So I'm letting you go
To find someone new
Someone who is more
Deserving of you
So you see, though we fought
We just couldn't win
So I'm letting you go
A new life to begin
Author notes
This one is actually the first in a series of break-up poems that came after this one.
Tell me what you think. Not sure if it is done yet or not.
Comments
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very sincere. i like the last line line: "A new life to begin."
Very nice job on it; makes me think of hope, which is always good.
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Wow omg this made me cry
It was like my ex said this to me. Good lord for we fought so much and hard we just didn't work and he cheated. Great poem loved it
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awwww. i am very sorry.. this is really sad. Hopefully you find that it was worth it. It is better to love and lost then to never love at all..
Rose -
CAptured from the first stanza. It was a beautiful poem and I am sorry that the wound is still fresh. This wasn't corny and that I could appreciate, and a word of advise? I'm not going to tell you cheer up, but be thankful and nostalgic on the good times and the bad times that gradually grew to better times that you had with the one who inspired this write.
May Your Muse Forever And Always Inspire You
K. -
beutiful writen
Of all ur work yet
And life makes things better
and makes you forget
For love to hove come
And sweep right away
For you my dear friend
I wish a better day.
I hope more like this comes
From a poet like you
And May all of your wishes,
Good or bad, come true.
KillerRain
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hmmm is this for who I think it is?
very well written my friend -
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Yes, Care. It IS for she who shares your name. I'm...in a place right now for the next year or so that makes having a relationship with her impossible, I'm afraid. We DID try though. And lasted longer than we probably should have. Single again! *sigh* Joy... (Sarcasm)
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