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Journey

Missing image
floating
past old daydreams
that drift with life’s currents,
tide departs with flotsam’s heartbreak,
sailing
close to shoreline,
beckons horizon’s hope
for further journeys past the reefs,
waiting
for autumn’s moon
to shed light upon waves
that continue to curl and froth,
calling


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  • carole21
    September 29, 2008
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    nicely done . . thanks for the contest entry


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    September 27, 2008

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    This is so outstanding it takes my breath away when it is read. The kind of poem you feel in your bones! Good luck in the contest!