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Silent Stare

How can this happen?
The person i thought was so close to me,
The person i thought was my everything,
He let people take advantage.
Of something that wasnt thiers,
Something that should of just stayed between us,
Something i was bound to give to him,
But instead he let someone else take.
How can you sit there and watch people you barely know take something,
So precious,
So dear to my heart.
How can you sit and deal with the fact that even though you didnt touch me you were still apart of this,
Mental
Physical
Rape.
Your "in love" didn't mean the same thing as mines.
On top of all that madness,
You had the nerve to tell me everythings alright and make love to the other girl.
Why am i angry?
Because you took away my innocence,
Because you gave somebody else what i always wanted.
While i was "getting some" by somebody i didnt even know.
In the end my heart will never mend
And love will never be the cure to a broken heart...

Author notes

This not a true story. I had dream last night about it. It just got me really depressed because the girl was me and the guy was my boyfriend of 3 years. The dream felt real hence this poem.

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  • xxamber37xx
    October 26, 2008

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    "You had the nerve to tell me everythings alright and make love to the other girl" absolutely breathtaking.. this is a very sad, deep, emotional poem.. fantastic piece, keep up the good work dear <3

  • depressedangelchick
    October 1, 2008

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    wow i hope that dream doesnt come true because i would've been even more dead inside than i am and then got revenge on the ass who did it 2 me. this poem out me in there

  • blaizenaway
    September 28, 2008
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    ThankGod it's not a true story sent a shiver down my spine! Real emotion depicted here great write!


  • soldiersoul gold member
    September 28, 2008
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    hmmmmmmmm gotta love those dreamscapes...nothing worse than pillow fights while yer sleepin