its as dark as the black sky,
and as rich as the richest man alive,
when i awaken it vanishes!
calling unto me it says "i am watching your every movement, hearing your evrey breath."
as i wonder who this is i take a step back and slowly fall to my knees,
i look at the mirror before me and my reflection is standing while im on the floor,
it has a gun pointing in my direction,
she shoots, and BAM!
i feel nothing but pain as i fall to the floor,
hoping to get up again,
maybe god will let me live the life i intened to live.
A contest entry
- Suit Yourself... by Randomly Beautiful.
300 points, ended October 13, 2008, 6 entries
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you got this.
this is good.
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Thank you for the time and entry.
Best wishes.
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you have a dark mind... intriguing....
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Wow Dark....
Very powerful imagery. Did you ues no caps to emphasize the bleakness?
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no i did not why do you ask
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hmmm, this is very intresting, it makes the reader think, keep writting,a nd take care
Stephanie ♥
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