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Subtlety



The sway of your hips,
fills my mind with wonder,
your green eyes and ruby lips,
fill my loins with thunder.

Words fall from subtle lips,
in the flight of angels wings,
as I become so lost in you,
my lonely heart now sings.

Whispers of kind words,
shall kiss my longing ears,
words I have not yet heard,
in so many longing years.

A touch so gentle and sweet,
shall melt me to the bone,
I feel like a million bucks,
I no longer feel lost, alone.

The trickle of your muse,
tickles this dormant entity,
with all the charms of your ways,
in all your loving subtlety.








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The day I met you.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    I love this piece my dearest, for you are an amazing poet, one whose soul I know so well.

    Joann


  • HeartTangles
    September 28, 2008
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    Beautiful in love's subtlety. A heartfelt poem that conjurs love's memories.


  • SchizoChic
    September 27, 2008
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    Beautiful words... Best of luck.

  • Amarige
    September 27, 2008
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    nice loving and romantic piece...good luck