The sway of your hips,
fills my mind with wonder,
your green eyes and ruby lips,
fill my loins with thunder.
Words fall from subtle lips,
in the flight of angels wings,
as I become so lost in you,
my lonely heart now sings.
Whispers of kind words,
shall kiss my longing ears,
words I have not yet heard,
in so many longing years.
A touch so gentle and sweet,
shall melt me to the bone,
I feel like a million bucks,
I no longer feel lost, alone.
The trickle of your muse,
tickles this dormant entity,
with all the charms of your ways,
in all your loving subtlety.
Author notes
The day I met you.
A contest entry
- The Dirty Pretty Contest by SchizoChic.
425 points, ended September 29, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love this piece my dearest, for you are an amazing poet, one whose soul I know so well.
Joann

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Beautiful in love's subtlety. A heartfelt poem that conjurs love's memories.


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Beautiful words... Best of luck.
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nice loving and romantic piece...good luck






