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Sleepless Night

Help mee
My heart is pounding
Your face is haunting
God I can barely breath
Immmediately I panic
My mind goes frantic
I feel like I'm dieing
You are gone
But nnot for long
Still I'm dieing
I try to rest my head
immposssible with you not in my bed
Just one night
Gone from my sight
Several before like this
I would not wish for again
Come back so I can breath again.

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  • EvansV
    May 4

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    awesome love it

    i try to rest my head immpossible with you not in my bed just one night gone from my sight several before like this i would not wish again come back soon so i can breath again


  • Dark Prince Chaos
    December 1, 2008

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    sweet write i love the emoshon in this and i know that felling ive been there a work of atr this is ^_^ -bows-