Sometimes I walk wit no destination
I'm just what they call a bad creation,
For I am nothing in This nation
My Heart needs Some Ventilatin
back up gimmie five feet ur n my station
Do u understand or do u need a translation?
A contest entry
- The Dirty Pretty Contest by SchizoChic.
425 points, ended September 29, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty is my policy!!!
Comments
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hahahaha, thats laying it on the line for sure. sounds like quite a walk to me. happy strolling.
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Cute! Nice job. Best of luck.
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the idea is ok, but the execution is horrendous and the spelling is atrocious. Also I wasn't a fan of the repetitive end rhyme. It seemed forced.
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