River spirits,
sprinkle your faerydust
like gleaming diamonds
falling under the Sun,
carried by a tide
like feathers in the wind
on water glittering.
For I am a flowing wave
in the river of life,
and your blessing
is the oxygen I need.
Author notes
Inspired by this quote:
"I am a flowing wave
in the river of life"
- Unknown
A contest entry
- the river of life... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 5, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this flies
oxygen to breathe, stunning
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Well done!
the flow of life is water!
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Light, bright and sparkling, full of hope, always looking forward to enjoying more of life
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You are so true..and touched the essence of the universal scenario of the prompt so wonderfully..well said..
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A wonderful read and so right with the essence of the spirit, for we all either flow, ebb or weave in various ways, the fabric of the universe.
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