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Killed spirit

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My life it has turned to crap
There is nothing here for me anymore
I seem to fuck up every relationship I get into
The things that I say seem to upset everyone
I loved my life the way it was
Why did I have to change it???

I have destroyed the trust in myself
I have killed the vary spirit that keeps
Me alive the things that I have worked
To get have all fallen down I have ruined
Everything has been ruined because of me

There is nothing left for me anymore in this day and age
I was never accepted by my peers
My time is up let the angel of death
Come and take my soul away let the,

Cold smooth razor blade slide across
My wrists the blood spew out like a
Garden water fountain there is nothing
For me anymore!

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  • XxjustinsgirlxX
    September 29, 2008

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    omg its seems like you are like me b/c every relationship has been fucked up. But i love your poem. U did a great job!!


  • xXemo-teddybearXx
    September 28, 2008

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    wow u must hav been watching me last night this is just how things went and i actually bled too much and sadly im still here stuck in pain but i really like this very much