Touching skin,
kissing lips,
deep desire.
Feel the need,
see the flames,
touch the fire.
Whispered words,
passion grows,
bodies meet,
Only giving,
never taking,
both complete.
A contest entry
- this contest is for adults only. by JinSays.
500 points, ended September 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a epic, told simple. Excellent take, thank you for your entry, and good luck,
jin -
Beautiful flow and rhyme in this lovely
write! Good luck to you and thanks a lot
for sharing this one here!
Jeremy0826 -
I enjoyed this had a great flow and wonderful sensual descriptions! Good Luck in contest
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