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What a Night

This body or should I say
this memorisation of perfection
Alluring for want of the gentlest touch
beautys vision demands attention to every detail
No part void of perfectly formed recognition
this journey must not and will not be hurried
As lip’s are my transport as I discover
her skin which I hardly feel, akin to kissing fresh air
Fresh morning air, arousing my sensuality
Kevin Kevin… bloody hell “ what you wake up for

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  • tomisb
    September 29, 2008

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    I know dreams to well and the spell. Well done and I appreciate the humor.
    Peace,
    Tom B.


  • JinSays gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    beautys vision demands attention to every detail
    No part void of perfectly formed recognition
    this journey must not and will not be hurried

    REALLY NICE. Thank you,
    jin