Pushed Down
Struck Out
You'll be fine.
Down and Out
Your mind is closed.
Open it,
See whats inside.
Your dreams can come true.
Believe me when i say
It's yours for the taking
Seize it.
Dream it.
Be it.
Dont be afraid of what people will think.
Dont lock your dreams away.
Keep your heart open to
Save your mind.
The Media is telling you "your too young".
Dont fight back.
Actions speak louder than words.
Prove them Wrong.
A contest entry
- Never Give Up (1000 Points) Lots of HMs by sOuL.
750 points, ended December 14, 2008, 43 entries
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Comments
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"Don't lock your dreams away." Sometimes, it can be hard not to be because dreaming can be scary. But try to open your mind and look inside, as this write says.
I like what you have done here.
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wow this is a very good poem
the second stanza really have the power to be influential and can inspire someone
and the third stanza supports the second stanza in the best way
i love this entry
wish you all the best of luck
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