With the soreness of my back
the twisting of my stomach
and the annoying iching of my breast
my pain,
becomes your problem
With my baggy eyelids
thirst for water
and bloated abdomen
Today's the day you meet a new me
With my uncontrollable mood swings
and you tap dancing on my last nerve
you should be able to notice
this will not be a good day
with my unexpected friend visiting
and no pill to take care of it
I've realized,
someone has to pay
It's the begining of the week
how am i supposed to make it
without one sacrifice,
dedicated to mother nature to ease the pain
so I'll ask you nicely
give up your life and make me happy
or don't and die anyway
either way it's a win win situation
For me, of course
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A contest entry
- Simple Free Verse Poetry by Dalaney.
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Comments
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i also learned a new meaning for P.M.S
punish
men
surverly
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ha i like it
i dont understand why guys dont notice lol
but all and all
its great
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Thanks for entering!
Since this is anonymous, I'm going to kid myself you're the first male on earth to understand me with PMS. Perfect Man (not that you exist), please sweep me off my feet ;D
Now, to the woman who must have written this, excellent, made me laugh out loud in places, and such an accurate depiction of me I can only assume us to be long lost relatives of some sort!
Good luck;
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I loved this! I couldn't stop laughing! I loved it! WOW! NICELY DONE! this was really really good! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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I love the title it is so true. I will laugh everytime I think about this poem. Good Poem.
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I like the last line of the first stanza as well. XD
I also like the last line. It's too true.
Good luck <3
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lol
I love the last line of the first stanza
This was totally awesome and sounds familiar.... XD
Awesome!
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This is me today, how did you know? lol... Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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ha! i love this! thanks for using the one prompt i wasn't sure anyone would use
Love, Lane
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This is fantastic...I'm still laughing. This happened to me today actually...I'm still not talking to my boyfriend tonight and I warned him when I got up this morning that I didn't feel very good...did he listen...hell no and he's sleeping alone tonight caused I'm staying in the guest room.
I loved this...definately a favorite and worth reading again. Thanks for the laugh.
Nevadapoet
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P.S. I went and submitted this for a spotlight on the front page so look for it
Truly enjoyable
Shelly
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Believe it or not, I understand this completely, having had it explained to me many times.
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