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Scared Holidays

September Angel rides an impact beyond a dream
into October's touch of bitter sweet addiction,
afraid of grace in nightmare tears inside suicide
with a letter adoring lonely holidays in fear to come, scared

Author notes

read rules wrong I thought you had to put them all into one stanza...sorry

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    October 3, 2008
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    A lot said in a few words!
    well done and congratulations on the award!


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    September 27, 2008

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    That's ok. It works this way too, I'm not really that picky lol. It is an excellent write! Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!


  • Myjoy
    September 27, 2008

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    I still think this is good. You did well with the word to tell the reader the story, emotions expressed. Good luck to you.