on the
roadside
an
open book
passing
cars…
leaf
through
my
pages
Author notes
beat poets i admire; Bukowski/Ginsberg
"this poem, is me"
A contest entry
- Bukowski/Ginsberg by Beata.
600 points, ended October 2, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is very nice. I like.
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excellent extended metaphor here for an 'unknown poet'.
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This did indeed remind me of Bukowski's style of writing. I liked how the middle stanza separates and connects and allows the reader so many different ways to read this. Cleverly written.
~ Nicolette
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waaaaahh
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ok, now
this book consists of poems of an unknown poet, but still shown a tender hearted poets view of stopping and reading, nice piece here, good luck in the contest
Linda
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