Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Egotism

Death does consume the soul,
But only when one can open their eyes fully,
Do they see the whole capacity of life.
Whether good or bad.

Tell me what you think, Is it good or bad?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 7 of 7

  • Raining Kisses gold member
    November 14, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    How very thought provoking, so much strength in so few words, this has sent a shiver down my spine good stuff


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 10, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Very thought provoking, deep meaning in so few words...
    thank you for sharing.
    mystic

  • SoulWhispher
    September 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Great litte Poem

    Well done, as others have said, most thought provoking, John


  • Cynthia Gaines
    September 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Thank you for sharing...

    This is a really thought-provoking poem. Take care, Yellow Moon


  • Hope Angel silver member
    September 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Very thought provocking, so much said in four lines. An amazing poem.


    • Akari
      September 28, 2008
      Edit | Reply

      Thanks for the comment.

      It sort've came to me while i was tryig to sleep.


      • Hope Angel silver member
        September 28, 2008
        Edit | Reply
        Your welcome.
        A lot of good things come from before we sleep and stuff. Odd but true. lol

1 - 7 of 7