Dipping my finger into the waters of scrutiny
I travel my moistened finger along the rim
as the stuttering motion of each stop and start
resonates minor fault
My eyes eavesdrop upon transparent words
overlaying useless antidotes
and hastily scribed etymologies
recycled by untarnished faith
Author notes
this was inspired by the contest title, image and my past abuse
A contest entry
- .slave to detail. by girl shaman.
500 points, ended September 27, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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hm only thing i would suggest is that you chose another title; only because it seems a bit off that you would take the title of the contest without trying to make your own. thanx much for entering
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I chose the title in credit of inspiration not for lack of creativity.
Thanks for your suggestion.
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All I can say is: Wow. And you must have found your focus.
Yink
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eh... I just wrung something out after my nap
I LOVE sleeeeeep
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