Man I am confused,
Do I
or
Don't.
You seem to see something
about me...
But do you know....
I always wonder what you think,
when you see me.
Your eyes so blue,
mine Blue-green.
So what do you think?
Ok.
Author notes
You might under stand it...but if you dont I am not going to say...
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Please tell me what you think
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I feel someone unsure of herself
Often when you are lacking in confidence you worry constantly of what others might think . Its something we all can learn this confidence .If you are happy and know you live right and treat others right about you then what more should you need in this confidence for you are giving your all to those you care for . Their eyes so tells all sometimes their mind and mouths dont connect to voice it but their eyes never lies
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It's never easy to make these decisions, especially when the hearts involved. The heart is a bitter organ, I have learnt. It just wants to be cruel to us.
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OMG!
Like flippin' gosh!This was so pretty!YAAAAAAAAAY!
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i understand it congrats
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hard to understand...
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Beautifully written and spoken from the heart. Great write.
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For a title, I suggest "Tell Me". The poem itself is very nice!
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good idea! Thanks!
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