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Anything but Cute

This description she spoke of about being cute
was simple enough; for me to compute
yet in this reputable message, used many times
it pushed away a chance to make compatible rhythm



A contest entry

Just try and read it sensibly please

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    lol.. well.. that is cute! Not sure how it relates to the picture.. but fun!


  • Canadamomma
    September 26, 2008
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    interesting twist, i like it
    good luck