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I've got this lead weight in my chest
and a pounding in my temples
edges are hazy and all I want to do is lose myself in stupidity

reckless behaviour seems the better option these days
sleeping on couches and park benches
don't go home
no, won't go home

it's pieces,
PIECES I tell you
edgewise and sharp
and a heartbeat drum reverberates through

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My parents might be getting a divorce and I feel like I have no control over my life at the moment.

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  • girl shaman
    September 27, 2008
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    oh dear..
    lots of emotion here..
    im sorry i cant really comment well but i've been through this myself, and all i can say is although you may not be able to control that situation in your life, you still have your own to live. just keep going.. and dont let anyone get you down.

    <3


  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    September 27, 2008

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    .................damn. That sucks. a lot. Wish I could say something better but sometimes I'm not the most prolific person at 1:30am. =\
    Good luck with everything