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A Long Way From Home

You might think
I'm just a cute Kinkajou
But believe me human
I'll take a bite out of you.

They say I'm a part
Of the raccoon family
But those big fatties
Are dumb compared to me.

Ya, I'm the genius
With the prehensile tail
I can hang from a limb
and still catch myself a meal

I sleep during the day
and creep about at night
I got what they call
Good vision at night

Some people caught me
As I slept in a tree
They thought they could make
A good pet out of me.

Soon they realized
This they couldn't do
So gave me to a blond
They Called Paloszoo!

Now I am happy
as you can see
Eating an apple
Up high in a tree.

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An I wanna a be your kinkajou!

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 10, 2008
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    You are now my pet kinkajou. Welcome to my family


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 30, 2008
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    I also forgot to add that I'm honored you've chosen to enter my contest. It means a lot to me. Thank you!


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    What a cheery piece! I can just picture you scampering up a tree and munching away! Well wordcrafted! It brought a smile to me.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    This is a great poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it from beginning to end. Personally, since I was a small kid, I always wanted to have an armadillo.

    Mike


  • DennisP1
    September 28, 2008
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    Thank you Kim,

    I was going to open a children's zoo on some property I had out here on the RI and Mass line.. During the time I was going for the permits I started collecting exotic animals.. I had a kinkajuo, raccon, and a 10 ft boa, in the house. Along with deposits on an old lion and a chimp. Alas I didn't get the permit because the property wasn't large enough. So had to give them up to Southwick Wild Animal farm. I did get a life time pass for them though...

    What you are doing for the promotion and protection of these critters is a wonderful thing.

    If I was a lost little critter, or big one, I can't think of a better place to be than with someone who understood me and cared for my well being..

  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    Very clever. I love this. Do you really want to be my kinkajou? I already have 6 real ones. Dontcha wanna be a human?

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