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Blackened Rainbows



Unkind words
Beating my spirit
Into submission
Scratching broken feelings
Across my hollow bones
Twisting thoughts
Across blackened rainbows
Turning blood into stone
To protect my dying heart


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  • Alilly silver member
    March 15
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    Very dark and nice.


  • individuality gold member
    March 13

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    a good poem penned - ah captain, sometimes those unkind ones find us, we have to grin and bear them then kick them into touch.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    October 13, 2008

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    Hard emotions expressed in this quick listing. There are times when those words bring points into focus, if only to protect self. Good work here. ~Pamela

  • Warrior7
    September 27, 2008

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    A very deep write here, i love the two opening lines "Unkind words beating my spirit"
    Hope all is ok with you