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Just Want To Cry

I want to cry
Cry it all out

I want to scream
Scream it all out

I want to burn
Burn it all otu

I want to bleed
Bleed it all out

I want to leave
Leave it all behind

I want to fall
Fall of this cliff

I want to dance
Dance into the unknown

I want to bury
Bury it all away

I want to plead
Plead it all to go
To leave me alone

I want to feel
Feel your love

I want to feel
Feel your arms around me

I want to scream
I want to cry
I want to bleed
I want to die
I want you
But your so far away

So far away that I
I can't reach you

And you,
You won't hear me

Hear me screaming,
And crying,

Out for you to save me

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  • Joy.To.The.World
    September 26, 2008

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    This is really good. In line six you need to fix the word out. other then that, that was a very good write.