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Taxi Youth, Labyrinth Earth Rituals

And you're making me feel
Like I'll never belong
Even though I know
You really don't mean it

And you're just like the lies
That fill the hollow gaps
But eventually everything
Will start to rot away

And you're the black
That completes my white
If only I could tell you
It's a perfect combination

And you're the perfect chance
I never seem to get
So whisper in my ear
When the opportunity comes

And you're the nervous system
I never had before
So tell me when I'm in pain
Because I can't feel anymore

And you're my current muse
Since I've lost my last one
So tell me that I'm great
And give me a little inspiration

And you're really not my type
Yet you still catch my eye
I really should ignore this
But what's a "type" now, anyway?

And you're so different from me
It's a whole other spectrum
I've got my rainbows
And you've got your shadows

And you're never going to know
Because I'm never going to tell
And you'll only find out
If you find the way in

Author notes

Lyrics used in first two lines of first stanza, "She said, She said" The Beatles.

Dec. 24, 2008: Going back and reading this for like, the 30th time, I realized that every stanza started with "And You're..." Did anyone else notice that, or was it just me? Now, notice the title. It's one of those, oh, what's it called? Anagrams? Hm...
Well, anyway, I have a few more like this. I even have a few that use 'labyrinth' in them. Just to let you know, that word, along with Tyranny, relate to the same person. This would be the first installment, I suppose you could call it.

-Papers

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  • reckless abandon
    January 31
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    I really loved reading this, it has a cool flow to it and I like the repitition. thanks for sharing

  • dizzy
    November 16, 2008
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    that was good...job well done


  • AshlEEshAnnOn
    September 29, 2008
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    this rocks!!!!!! seriously. it just feels right


    • Papers
      September 29, 2008
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      Thanks. This is my current favorite right now.