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No... Not Ever




When will I forget
the love we shared?

When will I forget
the dreams you taught
me to believe in?

Chorus:

I don't think
it'll be anytime soon.
It seems to me
it's gonna be
more like never,
and you know
never is a long, long time
from now.


When you said to me,
you can do anything,
anything you want,
you just have to believe-
believe in your self.

When you instilled
that into me,
you gave me hope,
a dream that now,
lives deep inside of me.

And when will
I let go of that?


Chorus:

I don't think
it'll be anytime soon.
It seems to me
it's gonna be
more like never,
and you know
never is a long, long time
from now.



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  • penman gold member
    February 25
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    Excellent

    Wow, such a powerful write. So very creative. Thank you for sharing.


  • Desire gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Wowzers~

    You are so darn good at lyrics- I have to press my noggin to the wall with force to get lyrics released
    ~ Wild~ Another one You can add to Your collection
    This also swells the eyes
    Woot!!
    Beauty
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Amera gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    I know this is a song but the emotion is so powerful in it that I just prefer to read it.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 14, 2008
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    Good write here

    Yes we can help one another find our true strengths and see our hopes and dreams come to life


    • StarEyes
      October 14, 2008
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      Yes... The one I am speaking to in this song, did just that for me, and I owe this person so much, but never got to tell them that, before they passed on. I just keep telling them that in the poems I write and the songs, and the love that I still carry for them today.


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    " never is a long, long time
    from now ".

    I really like that part Twinsy.
    Very heartfelt and emotional,
    the lyrics are beautiful and sad,
    touches the heart in a gentle kind
    of way. You'll never forget, something
    that was so amazing and special, it will
    stay with you for always, right in that
    loving heart of yours.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • imperfectperfection
    September 29, 2008

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    Brilliance at its Best

    Nyetta hun, this is a very powerful heartfelt song you've penned...

    love comes and goes like a season
    some people give and take for a reason
    when true comes swirling a storm
    that blows away off your feet
    leaves you never alone again
    it stays with you for now and forever
    within you, in your heart...
    no...not ever you can forget
    the dreams you once believed in
    for your true loved still lives within
    beating alive in your heart

    no surprise there, your an amazing writer - be it any form you bring the beauty of words to shine... absolutely a delight to read and when would I be hearing this song ?

    Thanks for the honor of letting me be part of your fan club... take care Love Minoo

  • Lucille
    September 27, 2008
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    I agree, these lyrics are amazing. Very powerfful.
    great work


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 26, 2008

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    Nice lyrics. You have done a good job with this. Whenever I read lyric poems I always wonder the tune that was going through the head of the poet.

    Great job.

    Mike


  • Re-invention silver member
    September 26, 2008

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    these are powerful lyrics, and the BG goes very well with it... It would make a beautiful song you know,, so much emotion and pure sadness here.. great job!

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