This statement a lie, another statement
impending, contradicting, and insinuating
come alive and draw reality
the lines of society,
the hands of humanity
they draw each other,
rough yet truthful yet beautiful
Question now on what you see,
shall you see the reality of imagery,
or the imagery of reality?
Author notes
Hope you like it.
A contest entry
- "This statement is a lie." by PatheticKt.
300 points, ended September 30, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Ahh, just lovely.
The line prompt definitely makes you think and I like how you connected the two prompts well. Really fitting to this piece.
Got a bit lost, though with the lack of punctuation marks but no matter since the write didn't look like an enjambment
Of course, the question at the end was great, like you got it from one of the thoughts of a philosopher or something ~
Good write, all in all
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