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Take the time

Getting lost within time of a special poets hand

feeling life from her poetry all might understand

Critiquing is an art itself and she does it so well

always helping another how to see, touch or smell

 

True poets don't just put down words of rhyme

they live each letter written, to the pages of time

Comments don't go un noticed to better the write

without insult ones imagination might ignite

 

She has hosted many contest with return to all

helping one another grow and not let feel small

Interest is the key, and she shines like a daisy

a very "beautiful" poet, our own                           

                                                          Cupcrazy!

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 23, 2008
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    Amen, Amen, Amen that is all i can think to say, i mean this is golden my friend, keep it flowing


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    October 14, 2008
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    You have described her well! So many of the things you appreciate about her are what first drew me to Bunny and allowed me to become her friend This is so lovely and stands as an example of the effect one beautiful person can have upon so many others. Thank you!


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    This is just beautiful thank you, I love it. Perfect meter and rhyme, a lovely write hun Hugs, Bunny


  • cutiepie gold member
    September 27, 2008
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    Somethin good indeed