hot night
kissing my lips
a bug
Author notes
No Portuguese, no bilingual, this is a monotongue haiku 
A contest entry
- haiku humor by Yemassee.
749 points, ended September 27, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I'm back - partially... so I guess it's time to pick some stupidness out of the bag and write the following:
I am just wondering - are you talking about that moment of the night, when you wake up and find yourself swallowing something you felt on your lips, just to realize afterward it could be a huge, big, fat spider you were munching away? Or maybe a cockroach - depending if that hot night was somewhere in Tenerife or India or something?
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Wow... its a wonderful haiku
Very funny...lol
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Congratulations on the HM...a well deserved win...
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fermez la bouche
pendant baisant
mon ami
I see you found a way
to slap the bug in!!!
M-C
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Esta noite esta cheia de insetos...very funny... h... [a night full of bugs]
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I know the feeling well...if it flies, stings or hops it lives in my neighborhood...we have love bugs here...do you have them...they are born to have sex and stay together copulating until they die...I guess some folks might say that's a good thing...
I would like to be able to comment in your language but will have to be happy with the English version...
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noite quente
beijando meus bordos
um erro
I tried.
Better kissing than biting! Blech, I've had my fill of bugs, I hate swallowing them.
You have this thing for bugs right now...it must be that computer problem you are having.
Thanks for the English version.
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Meus bordos LOLOLOL
meus lábios
and bug is just inseto
Hey, the bugs are still around, weather is good, kind of, and I still have to watch for the bites.
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