I have a calling to fight the man
to stand up and be heard
for the little guy, the enumerated.
Already I feel insignificant and powerless.
I am helpless in their system.
A contest entry
- Short Poems' Wanted!! by SignifyingNothing.
450 points, ended October 19, 2008, 123 entries
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Have you ever seen how big the world is? How many people? How many of them are in charge?
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I have to say that the color you picked for font made this very hard to read, I'd consider changing it.
This poem seems to start in hope but ends in despair. The first few notes seem to radiate confidence, but the speaker is overwhelmed in the end at the uselessness of taking a stand against those who hold power.
Nice job, if a somewhat sad message. -
A+
When you get pissed, move your enemies in your territory.
It works like a charm.
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