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Hand some

Wow you look so handsome tonight
in fact
You look finger lickin' good
You gave me a ring and I answered
Like any good girl should

Hands together always
Touching thoughts of love
shared with one another
not covered by a glove

Finger tips connecting
skin so tender and bare
no need for eyes connecting
We are the perfect pair

Author notes

Just a bit of fun. You did say creative and raw. LOL Join this wonderful contest..http://allpoetry.com/poem/4630603.. Be inspired.
A great picture taken by Di's Boyfriend. I think it's excellent. He is a great photographer.

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  • Dienush
    October 4, 2008
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    Aww just noticed your AN, they're as sweet as the poem

    & forgot something...

  • Dienush
    September 26, 2008

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    Hmm. I think you have accidentally submitted this with incomplete author notes, could you please fix that?

    I asked that you please not use the picture - it's okay that you did, but could you please credit it linking to my contest page for further explanations? Thanks

    Now for the actual poem. The word play on "hand some" and "handsome" is fun. This poem is obvious, but very sweet.

    Thanks for entering my contest

    ~Diana